Escucho música en mi cuerpo
a través del ojo ciego
de mi sueño polvoriento
Así derrito, como la nieve,
los huecos del miedo
para no ver mi ego fracturado.
Intento escribir mis versos
en los espacios oscuros, vacíos,
hundidos en mi conciencia.
La niebla cubre mis párpados
dejando a la deriva las palabras
Los ritmos y sonidos se curvan
cual espada al atravesar el fuego.
Se quiebran como el cristal
debajo de los pensamientos velados.
El poema va cambiando sus acentos
en las hileras de horas abandonadas
esperando ser rescatado
cuando el corazón
no duela al latir.
Muy bonito poema es muy enigmático.
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Cuando lo escribimos debajo de la luna, la oscuridad hace sentir su rumor. Gracias por estar aquí. Eres muy amable. Un buen fin de semana.
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Quel cuore è ciò di cui abbiamo bisogno quando la luna smette di accendersi. Grazie
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Bene, ho già il ricambio per sostituire il mio e due volte. Una buona domenica per te.
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Se ha constatado que el vínculo existente entre la música y nuestro sistema motor se inicia durante la gestación; y también que ese vínculo está arraigado en nuestro cerebro. Ahora, un estudio realizado por científicos noruegos señala, además, que nuestra mente tiene grabadas profundamente imágenes de movimientos corporales relacionados con la producción de sonido; unas imágenes que tendemos a recrear cuando escuchamos música.
Ennio Morricone – The Mission from Ann Kim on Vimeo.
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Desde que nacemos, ya sabemos que música nos va a gustar escuchar. Un explicación para ahondar en el conocimiento del cuerpo humano.Gracias amigo . Muy amable de tu parte.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you. You’re very kind. A good Sunday
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•~… que chulería versos musicales.~•
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Para atajar los aullidos que vienen en la noche sin luna. Un feliz domingo y gracias por comentar.
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•~…auténtica forma de atajar los aullidos, gracias buenas energías!~•
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Beautiful.
A good Sunday for you, too.
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It’s cool that you liked it. Thank you. Also for you a happy Sunday.
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Palabras muy bonitas.
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Muchas gracias por estar aquí. Un feliz domingo.
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I LISTEN TO MUSIC IN MY BODY
22h ago
I listen to music in my body
through the blind eye
from my dusty dream
So melted, like snow,
the holes of fear
so as not to see my fractured ego.
I try to write my verses
in dark, empty spaces,
sunk in my conscience.
Fog covers my eyelids
Leaving the words adrift
The rhythms and sounds curve
like a sword when crossing the fire.
They break like glass
under the veiled thoughts.
The poem changes its accents
in the rows of abandoned hours
waiting to be rescued
when the heart
It does not hurt when it beats. I loved it!!!
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I appreciate your time to translate. You’re very kind. Greetings.
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Sento la musica nel mio corpo
attraverso l’occhio cieco
del mio sogno polveroso.
Così mi sciolgo, come la neve,
le cavità della paura
per non vedere il mio ego fratturato.
Provo a scrivere i miei versi
negli spazi bui e vuoti,
affondato nella mia coscienza.
La nebbia copre le mie palpebre,
lasciando le parole alla deriva:
i ritmi e i suoni si incurvano come una
spada quando attraversano il fuoco.
Si rompono come vetro
sotto i pensieri velati.
Il poema cambia i suoi accenti
nelle file di ore abbandonate che
aspettano di essere salvati
quando il cuore
non fa male quando batte.
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L’ho letto ad un amico italiano ed è bello i suoni. Grazie per aver accettato quel lavoro. Un abbraccio
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sono molto contento
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Sono contento che ti sia piaciuto. Saluti.
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Agree, it’s a good thing to do. Especially, when you know the music already.
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And we have to dance to the sound of how it sounds. I appreciate your comment. Have a great week.
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Teus poemas são música pra mim.
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Honra que você faça. Eu também gosto do seu blog. Obrigado pela leitura. um abraço.
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So well expressed. 🙂
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Que el corazón no duela al latir. Mejor que cante versos y al ritmo de música se vuele e impregne al mundo de sentimiento y emociones.
Me gusta mucho Manuel.
Un gusto enorme leerte.
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Qué te guste, es lo mejor para mi porque se de tu sensibilidad para decir las cosas. Muchas gracias amiga.
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Un placer leerte Manuel.
Saludoss
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A ti también.
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Its deep & beautiful in the translation☺️… Wonder what feelings it brings out in the original!!!! Loved it🙏
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The verses awaken when there is silence in the soul. I will do my best to get the translation and I will send it to you with the greatest pleasure.
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Oh thank you so much🙏… I wanted to ask you but didn’t want to give you any troubles. I do have a translation at my end… But its always nicer to have the writers original thoughts… Thanks again. Look forward to your writings…
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That’s how it would be in English.
I LISTEN TO MUSIC IN MY BODY
I listen to music in my body
through the blind eye
from my dusty dream
So melted, like snow,
the holes of fear
so as not to see my fractured ego.
I try to write my verses
in dark, empty spaces,
sunk in my conscience.
Fog covers my eyelids
Leaving the words adrift
The rhythms and sounds curve
like a sword when crossing the fire.
They break like glass
under the veiled thoughts.
The poem changes its accents
in the rows of abandoned hours
waiting to be rescued
when the heart
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Wowww!!! I’m not as good as you in expressing… I could feel every feeling your words say and don’t know what’s the best way to say it. You’re such an amazing thoughtful person. I’m so glad I’v connected with you🙏. Early in the morning you got a smile not just on my face but even to my heart…thank you for making my day☺️
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Unintentionally, space has that virtue of letting the thoughts that combine with one another meet. I confess that when I found your blog, just look at the photo and in the depths of my silence and I connected with you. Your face followed me and with all due respect, I felt happy to appreciate the beauty of a woman. Then I was attracted to the way you write. Now we will let the breath of the wind open to the road and do not disappoint you with my verses.
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You say it all so effortlessly and beautifully…right now I’m only grinning and whatever little flair for words I had… I think it’s also gone in that grin… Thank you for appreciating me and my small piece of works🙏
Yes, I’ll look forward to your verses and with the way you are… Don’t think they could disappoint any!
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Excuse me, but by chance you’re the one who sings a song on YouTube with your sister on the guitar.
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Nope! Are you saying this listening to the little piece of chant I’v attached in my recent blog? It’s not professional singing… I just chant for personal practice and while being with my students… 🙂
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And also… The instrument used is not guitar but it’s called tanpura
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I heard all your songs, Lag Ja Galle, Chitta Kukkad, Hamen Tumse Pyar Kitna, Aey Kash Ke Hum. They seemed beautiful to me because your voice is a delight for the ears. In the fashion show you look great with that gorgeous evening dress that enhances your beauty. It cost me to place you at the dance with the singers. So I discovered that you are a singer, model, dancer and writer. What I promise you is to learn the language to make you a song. Here, in Venezuela, it is 12.45 at night but I will continue to listen to your voice.
Thanks for the clarification of the instrument.
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Hahah… Like your verses I’ll look forward to the song too…Oops! 12.45am… please sleep tight. Good night 🙏
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The night is young This is my song.
You accompany me with the moon
without trees on the road
The sadness went aside
when I took your hands
and the cold was dressed in flowers
I close my eyes to continue dreaming With the waters of the imagination
let me sing you a song
Your wonderful face
It’s a watercolor with mint flavor
An open book
to fill inspiration sheets
Your look burns the sky
and the stars are shaking
There is no distance that can separate us
if your lips
they talk about love
My last verse
travel with the carrier pigeon
If it reaches your hands
write what you feel
with the lyrics of my song.
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im so humbled…much gratitude 🙏 … the song is so beautiful. I take days to freeze a writeup that is in plain english of less than 500 words… and you have the talent to write a song- this expressive and intense… It probably didn’t even take you an hour! What to say… You’re so gifted, full of positive energy… Thank you again☺️ 😊
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The secret is in the muse that inspires you. This is how easy it is for the verses to come out. Now if I go to sleep. May your day be happy.
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😂🤣… Yes please🙏🙏🙏
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With that phrase to take care of me, I imagined that Shiva was walking me through the woods and that Rati gave me lessons about what love is.
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Wow! You really seem to know a lot about our culture 🙂
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Un poco . He leído y mi poeta favorito es Rumi
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Toca mi corazon.
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Y cuando su calor derrita las palabras, escucharé el sonido de tu cuerpo. Y se hizo la luz…..
Te agradezco tu comentario.
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Agradezco tu gentileza. Eres muy amable en tomarte tu tiempo. Muchas gracias.
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🙂 Genial!
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Qué jamás se quiebre ese maravilloso corazón, lleno de dulces sentimientos que sabes plasmar con el firme pulso y la tintatintas tus versos.
Querido amigo, me sorprendo cada día en tu espacio, con tus palabras, tus versos…
Poesía preguntó quién era…
Yo respondo como él:
Poesía eres tú. ⚘😘
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